First anniversary of me and my honey's marriage registration

Hi, This is a Capybara's Daily. I start to write right now.
→Hi! This is Capybara's Daily. I'm starting to write just now.
(My lovely tutor helped me to correct my sentences... Thanks!)

My husband gave me a bunch of beautiful flowers and a delicious Shampagne for our anniversary of marriage registration yesterday.   What a nice day♪
→My husband gave me a bouquet of beautiful flowers and delicious champagne for the anniversary of our marriage registration yesterday.What a romantic day!!!

We cooked "Japanese Nabe". This is the first time to cook "Nabe" in UK.
I love "Nabe" in the winter.
→I cooked Japanese "Nabe"for him. This is my first time to cook Nabe in UK. I love "Nabe" during winter.